TOEFL 2

1. Thesis Statement

            I prefer to save my money for my future to make my future family happy,

ensure my children’s future and help my younger brothers in the future.

Topic Sentences:

·      First, saving my money for my family’s future will make my children and wife happy.

·      Second, having a lot of money in the future helps you to ensure your children’s future.

·      Finally, helping my brothers in the future will make me happy and comfortable in my life.

2. Thesis Statement

      I prefer to try new things and take risks to change my routine, learn new

things and to gain experience.

Topic Sentences:

·      First, trying new things will change your routine and make you happier than before.

·      Second, doing new activities helps you learn new things.

·      Finally, trying new things and taking risks gives you more experience in life.

3. Thesis Statement

      People work because they need money to live, and some people work to know

new people, change their routine and to get experience about life.

Topic Sentences:

·      First, work helps people to know new kinds of other people.

·      Second, people work to change their routine and make their life busy.

·      Finally, some people work to get more experience about life.